Hope you are doing well! Welcome to our third activity. Please, post your comments before April 28th!
1. Choose a tale of terror from the ones I left you in the copy center (C&P).
++ Take the version you wrote in PRESENT TENSE, and rewrite it into the PAST TENSE.
3. Include comments related to what you like the most or what you do not like about it.
4. Prepare an oral report about the tale to be presented in the tutorial sessions (from april 29th to may 2nd), you just will have 2 minutes and it is expected you to say 40 sentences at least.
4. Language use / writing aspects:
- Present and past simple sentence structure.
- Useful vocabulary you need to express your ideas, "taken from the same tale".
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
THE TRIAL FOR MURDER
ReplyDeleteToday is a beautiful day, like each Monday I walk for the park, there are many people around here, in the next street a man looks what happened out his windows, suddenly I see two men, they are walking strangely , the final one has a bad aspect , it looks that he wants hit to the first man, although I want to know more about this problem and the fight between those men, I have to go my home for cook the lunch.
One new day is waiting for me. Today is Tuesday, I have to go to market for some fruits and vegetables, but unfortunately nobody serves me, it seems that there is terrible new in the newspaper, somebody was murder last night, the police research the murderer , I don’t know why I think that the men of yesterday have some relation.
seem that the time is pass and finally the trial’s day starts, I want to sit very near to jury for see everything, but that surprise , the man who was in the windows last Monday’s morning is one the jury, and the first strange man is the accused.
The courtroom has a thick fog over it, two witness try to talk about the murder, the first one doesn’t finish her testimony, I don’t know why, and the final one looks scary and also he doesn’t finish it.
The man of the windows seems to know what is happening here, it has a white face, I think that he saw a ghost.
The trial has a inexpert turn, when a picture of the murdered is find in the murderer’s pocket .
Everything has been sort,the man is guilty although he tries deny all.
END .
THE TRIAL FOR MURDER
Some days ago was a beautiful day, like each Monday I walked for the park, there were many people around here, in the next street a man looked what happened out his windows, suddenly I saw two men, they were walking strangely , the final one had a bad aspect , it looked that he wanted hit to the first man, although I wanted to know more about this problem and the fight between those men, I had to go my home for cook the lunch.
One new day was waiting for me. It was Tuesday, I hadto go to market for some fruits and vegetables, but unfortunately nobody served me, it seemed that there is terrible new in the newspaper, somebody was murder some nights ago, the police researched the murderer for several time without answer, I didn’t know why I thought that the men of that day hadsome relation.
the time was passing and finally the trial’s day started, I wanted to sit very near to jury for see everything, but that surprise , the man who was in the windows last Monday’s morning was one the jury, and the first strange man was the accused.
The courtroom had a thick fog over it, two witness tried to talk about the murder, the first one didn’t finish her testimony, I did’t know why, and the final one looked scary and also he didn’t finish it.
The man of the windows seemed to know what was happening here, it had a white face, I thought that he had seen a ghost.
The trial had a inexpert turn, when a picture of the murdered was found in the murderer’s pocket .
Everything had been sort, the man was guilty although he tried deny all.
END .
I like this tale because it was very interesting also it had a lot of fail, there were many moments of plot , also the author could captivate me , he had my attention around this tale, for other hand It dislike me a little because the end was confuse , but in general it was very good tale!
DeleteMADAM CROWL’S GHOST
ReplyDeleteThis story is about a thirteen years old girl that goes to work with her aunt for Madam Crowl at Applewale House. She goes out of her house for the first time in her short life and she travels to the town of Lexhoe. When she arrives a man waits for her, his name is John Mulberry. He notices she’s nervous and he tries to cheer her up. When they arrive to Applewale House the first thing she notices is the size of the house. Her aunt waits for her at the entrance of the house, her aunt kisses her and takes her to the housekeeper’s room. The room seems to be comfortable and warm. Another woman comes to the room, her name is Mrs. Wyvern, and she is another worker there. The girl asks Msr. Wyvern about her job in the house and about the old lady they work for, Msr. Wyvern answers her that her job is to take care of the old lady and to avoid the old lady to jump into the fire or out the window. Then, Msr. Wyvern takes the girl into her bedroom that is next to Madam Crowl’s bedroom. Madam Crowl isn’t in good mood and she doesn’t let the girl to sleep well. The next morning she hears when Madam Crowl screams and she wants to go but her aunt does not let her. That night the girl goes downstairs to have dinner and after dinner her aunt tells her to go for a walk. She arrives to her room again and starts to look pictures in a book, then she hears Madam Crowl’s voice, but she does not understand anything. Then her aunt comes to her bedroom and warns her to not to make any noise because Madam Crowls is sleep. The girl is nervous and she walks around the room, and without notice it, she finds herself in Madam Crowl’s bedroom. The old lady’s bed is cover with curtains and the room has a lot of candles, a mirror calls her attention because of its size. Then, she gets approach to her bed and takes the curtains out to see the old lady, for her surprise, the old lady is cover with fine clothes, gold stuffs, silver shoes, thick make-up and long fingernails cut into points. The girls is very surprise when the old lady suddenly opens her eyes and says “¿why do you say I kill the boy? The girl feel afraid and she screams, then, her aunt arrives and Madam Crowls looks at her, the girl runs and Msr. Wyvern takes her in her arms. The girl tells her the story and Msr. Wyvern laughs but then the girl repeats her the question: “¿why do you say I kill the boy? And Msr. Wyvern spots to laugh. Msr. Wyvern tells the girls the story about Madam Crowl with her husband and son. According to Msr. Wyvern, the old lady was married and her husband had a son of another woman. The little nine years old boy was very active and liked to do a lot of different things. Once the boy disappeared. Madam Crowl got pregnant and she never let his husband to think about his lost son. The house’s owner now is the old lady’s grandson, Squire Chevenix Crowld.
Finally winter arrives and with winter, Madam Crowl’s ill arrives too. She becomes weak and finally she dies. Msr. Wyvern, the girl and her aunt stay at Applewale house, they wait for their payment. That night the girl move to another room, she can’t sleep during the night, she is seat with her back to the door and her eyes to the wall when a light shines against the wall and she sees a shadow ¡Madam Crowl’s Shadow! The old lady’s ghost flies around the room and takes a key out of the closet, finally the ghost opens an invisible door in the wall, looks at the girl with an evil smile and goes out. The girl runs until her aunt`s bedroom and tells her aunt her story, her aunt says that Squire Chevenix Crowld would arrive the next day and that she has to tell him everything. The next day comes fast and Squire Chevenix Crowld arrives. They tell him everything about the ghost and he decides to go to the room to take a look. What they find there is really shocking, but Squire Chevenix Crowld tries to cover it from the girl and says that those were cat’s bones.
A few months later the aunt’s girl comes to visit her to tell her the truth about the bones, that day they found Mr. Squires lost son.
This story was about a thirteen years old girl that went to work with her aunt for Madam Crowl at Applewale House. She went out of her house for the first time in her short life and she traveled to the town of Lexhoe. When she arrived a man waited for her, his name was John Mulberry. He noticed she was nervous and he tried to cheer her up. When they arrived to Applewale House the first thing she noticed was the size of the house. Her aunt waited for her at the entrance of the house, her aunt kissed her and took her to the housekeeper’s room. The room seemed to be comfortable and warm. Another woman came to the room, her name was Mrs. Wyvern, and she was another worker there. The girl asked Msr. Wyvern about her job in the house and about the old lady they worked for, Msr. Wyvern answered her that her job was to take care of the old lady and to avoid the old lady to jump into the fire or out the window. Then, Msr. Wyvern took the girl into her bedroom that was next to Madam Crowl’s bedroom. Madam Crowl wasn’t in good mood and she didn’t let the girl sleep well. The next morning she heard when Madam Crowl screamed and she wanted to go but her aunt did not let her. That night the girl went downstairs to have dinner and after dinner her aunt told her to go for a walk. She arrived to her room again and started to look pictures in a book, then she heard Madam Crowl’s voice, but she did not understand anything. Then her aunt came to her bedroom and warned her to not to make any noise because Madam Crowls was sleep. The girl was nervous and she walked around the room, and without notice it, she found herself in Madam Crowl’s bedroom. The old lady’s bed was cover with curtains and the room had a lot of candles, a mirror called her attention because of its size. Then, she got approach to her bed and took the curtains out to see the old lady, for her surprise, the old lady was cover with fine clothes, gold stuffs, silver shoes, thick make-up and long fingernails cut into points. The girls was very surprise when the old lady suddenly opened her eyes and said “¿why did you say I killed the boy? The girl felt afraid and she screamed, then, her aunt arrived and Madam Crowls looked at her, the girl ran and Msr. Wyvern took her in her arms. The girl told her the story and Msr. Wyvern laughed but then the girl repeated her the question: “¿why did you say I killed the boy? And Msr. Wyvern stopped to laugh. Msr. Wyvern told the girls the story about Madam Crowl with her husband and son. According to Msr. Wyvern, the old lady was married and her husband had a son of another woman. The little nine years old boy was very active and liked to do a lot of different things. Once the boy disappeared. Madam Crowl got pregnant and she never let his husband to think about his lost son. The house’s owner now is the old lady’s grandson, Squire Chevenix Crowld.
ReplyDeleteFinally winter arrived and with winter, Madam Crowl’s ill arrived too. She became weak and finally she died. Msr. Wyvern, the girl and her aunt stay at Applewale house, they waited for their payment. That night the girl moved to another room, she couldn’t sleep during the night, she was seat with her back to the door and her eyes to the wall when a light shined against the wall and she saw a shadow ¡Madam Crowl’s Shadow! The old lady’s ghost flew around the room and took a key out of the closet, finally the ghost opened an invisible door in the wall, looked at the girl with an evil smile and went out. The girl ran until her aunt`s bedroom and told her aunt her story, her aunt said that Squire Chevenix Crowld would arrive the next day and that she had to tell him everything. The next day came fast and Squire Chevenix Crowld arrived. They told him everything about the ghost and he decided to go to the room to take a look. What they found there was really shocking, but Squire Chevenix Crowld tried to cover it from the girl and said that those were cat’s bones.
A few months later the aunt’s girl came to visit her and told her the truth about the bones, that day they found Mr. Squires lost son.
I enjoy reading this tale because of the mistery and suspense but in my personal opinion I think the horror part of the story wasn't enough. my favorite part was the end because entails all the things that were missing in the rest of the tale.
ReplyDeleteMADAM CROWL´S GHOST
ReplyDeleteThe story begins with a thirteen year old girl who goes to work with her aunt for Madam Crowl. Her work is to take care of her. The day arrives and she travels to the town of Lexhoe. A man with a horse and carriage waits for her there. His name is John Mulberry. He says that there are cake and tea for her in the Applewale House. Then he drives to the Applewale House. The girl is nervous. It is the first time she meets her aunt and Madam Crowl. She arrives and her aunt receives her with a kiss, she immediately notices that her aunt is very friendly. The aunt takes her to the housekeeper’s room. There is a good weather and food, and she feels better now. There is an old woman sit by the fire, she is Mrs. Wyvern, and she also works in the house. Now her aunt goes upstairs to see Mrs. Crowl and they start to talk. Mrs. Wyvern warns the girl Madame Crowl is a difficult old lady, she tries silly things like to jump into the fire or out of the window, and the girl asks what is her job there, and Mrs. Wyvern says that is precisely to watch over her to avoid she does those fool things. Also she has to give her drink and food. Madame Crowl is ninety-three years old, she can see and hear well, but she is mad and does not remember many things, says Mrs. Wyvern. It is time to bed and the girl goes to her bedroom. It is next to the Madam Crowl’s. The next day she goes to have dinner and then she goes for a walk. When she comes back and locks her bedroom, she starts to look at the pictures in an old book and she listens to her aunt says “the devil cannot hurt you, madam, God is watching over us”. Then her aunt comes into her bedroom and tells her “be quite” Madame Crowl is asleep at last, but she cannot. After a few minutes she finds herself in Madam Crowl’s bedroom and she starts to look at carefully. She gets approach to her bed and suddenly she wakes up and asks her “why do you say I kill that boy” she goes backwards and the old lady tries to take her by the neck, but her aunt arrives and call out at that moment the girl runs to the Wyvern’s arms. Mrs. Wyvern laughs but when the girl tells her the Madam Crowl’s question, Mrs. Wyvern stays quite. After that Mrs. Wyvern or her aunt always joins her in Madame Crowl’s room. Then Mrs. Wyvern tells her the Madam Crowl’s history. She was married to Squire Crowl seventy years old. When she met him he had a son. He was very spoiled. One day he disappeared and only found his clothes next to the lake. Madam Crowl never left her husband to think alone about it. Then she got pregnant. Some years later Mr. Square died and his grandson became the responsible of the house. The winter comes and Madam Crowl falls ill. She starts to get worse and finally she dies. The three women go to the funeral. Madam’s grandson cannot come because he is far away. The three women have to wait for their payment in the big house. That night the girl sees Madam Crowl’s ghost trying to open a door in the corner of her bedroom, she runs away and tells it to her aunt. The next day Mr. Square arrives and she tells him the story too. Then all of them go to open the door. They think maybe there is a treasure, but when Mr. Square opens the door and sees something strange, he closes the door and says that those are bones of a cat. That day the girl gets the payment and comes back home. Some years later her aunt visits her and tells her the truth story. Those bones belonged to the Square’s lost child.
MADAM CROWL´S GHOST
ReplyDeleteThe story began with a thirteen year old girl who went to work with her aunt for Madam Crowl. Her work was to take care of her. The day arrived and she traveled to the town of Lexhoe. A man with a horse and carriage waited for her there. His name wa John Mulberry. He said that there were cake and tea for her in the Applewale House. Then he drove to the Applewale House. The girl was nervous. It was the first time she met her aunt and Madam Crowl. She arrived and her aunt received her with a kiss, she immediately noticed that her aunt was very friendly. The aunt took her to the housekeeper’s room. There was a good weather and food, and she felt better now. There was an old woman sat by the fire, she was Mrs. Wyvern, and she also worked in the house. Now her aunt went upstairs to see Madam Crowl and they started to talk. Mrs. Wyvern warned the girl Madame Crowl was a difficult old lady, she tried silly things like to jump into the fire or out of the window, and the girl asked what was her job there, and Mrs. Wyvern said that was precisely to watch over her to avoid she did those fool things. Also she had to give her drink and food. Madame Crowl is ninety-three years old, she can see and hear well, but she is mad and does not remember many things, said Mrs. Wyvern. It was time to bed and the girl went to her bedroom. It was next to the Madam Crowl’s. The next day she went downstairs to have dinner and then she went for a walk. When she came back and locked in her bedroom, she started to look at the pictures in an old book and she listened to her aunt says “the devil cannot hurt you, madam, God is watching over us”. Then her aunt came into her bedroom and told her “be quite” Madame Crowl is asleep at last, but she did not do. After a few minutes she found herself in Madam Crowl’s bedroom and she started to look at carefully. She got approach to her bed and suddenly she woke up and asked her” why do you say I kill that boy”, she went backwards and the old lady tried to take her by the neck, but her aunt arrived and called out, at that moment the girl ran to the Wyvern’s arms. Mrs. Wyvern laughed but when the girl told her Madam Crowl’s question, Mrs. Wyvern stayed quite. After that Mrs. Wyvern or her aunt always joined her in Madame Crowl’s room. Then Mrs. Wyvern told her the Madam Crowl’s history. She was married to Squire Crowl seventy years old. When she met him he had a son. He was very spoiled. One day he disappeared and only found his clothes next to the lake. Madam Crowl never left her husband to think alone about it. Then she got pregnant. Some years later Mr. Square died and his grandson became the responsible of the house. The winter came and Madam Crowl fell ill. She started to get worse and finally she died. The three women went to the funeral. Madam’s grandson could not come because he was far away. The three women had to wait for their payment in the big house. That night the girl saw Madam Crowl’s ghost trying to open a door in the corner of her bedroom, she ran away and told it to her aunt. The next day Mr. Square arrived and she told him the story too. Then all of them went to open the door. They thought maybe there was a treasure, but when Mr. Square opened the door and saw something strange, he closed it and said that those were bones of a cat. That day the girl got the payment and came back home. Some years later her aunt visited her and told her the truth story. Those bones belonged to the Square’s lost child.
This horror story caught my attention because of the mistery, I could not stop reading until I finished but at the end I was disappointed because I expected more terror. In my opinion the tale was good, but there were missing parts.
The tell tale heart
ReplyDeleteThe story begins with the protagonist who talks about how is his life with an old man and his evil eye. The young man says that he loves the old man because he's kind to him but the man's eye makes him feel sick. That eye is the reason of his madness. Our protagonist makes an evil plan against the nice old man. A week before killing him the young man is kind to him and every night goes to the old man's room just to see him. The night number 8 the young man decides to go to his bedroom and perform the evil plan. About midnight, He puts his head into the room to check it. Suddenly he moves on the bed and the young man doubts about make the murder but keeps with the plan. The old man wake up for a noise. He is scary and from anywhere sounds a noise like BANG, BANG BANG; is the Old’s heart beating in panic. Our protagonist jumps into the room and pulls him to the floor, puts the bed on top of him, killing him slowly. He hides de body under the floor and finally the killer is in peace. 3 cops knock the door to ask about a scream. The young man is not afraid and takes them into the house and later to the Old’s room just to show that all is fine. Takes 4 chairs into the room and they start to talk and laugh, but It's not all. Suddenly a noise begins to sound very loud and loud and apparently they don't listen it but He does. It is a BANGING is the heart of the old man. The young man is so scary and sweating and starts to talk louder. Moves the chair and walk over the place but sounds once again BANG, BANG, BANG, and LOUDER AND LOUDER. The murder can't keep doing this; he tells to the cops that stop this man and takes out the floor just to show Old's horrible heart.
The end
The tell tale heart
The story began with the protagonist who spoke about how was his life with an old man and his evil eye. The young man said that he loved the old man because he was kind to him but the man's eye made him feel sick. That eye was the reason of his madness. Our protagonist made an evil plan against the nice old man. A week before killing him the young man was kind to him and every night went to the old man's room just to saw him. The night number 8 the young man decided and went to his bedroom and performed the evil plan. About midnight, He put his head into the room to check it. Suddenly he moved on the bed and the young man doubted about made the murder but kept with the plan. The old man woke up for a noise. He was scary and from anywhere sounded a noise like BANG, BANG, BANG, was the old's heart beating in panic. Our protagonist jumped into the room and pulled him to the floor; put the bed on top of him, killing him slowly. He hide de body under the floor and finally the killer was in peace. 3 cops knocked the door and asked about a scream. The young man was not afraid and took them into the house and later to the Old’s room and showed that all was fine. Took 4 chairs into the room and they started to talk and laugh, but It was not all. Suddenly a noise began to sound very loud and loud and apparently they didn't listen it but He did. It was a BANGING was the heart of the old man. The young man was so scary and sweating and started to talk louder. He moved the chair and walked over the place but sounded once again BANG BANG, BANG, LOUDER AND LOUDER. The murder couldn’t' keep doing this, he told to the cops that stopped this man and took out the floor just to show Old's horrible heart.
I love so much this story and all Edgar Allan Poe stories. I'm a huge big fan of that man. He was a genius and all his stories are awesome. Definitely I can't hate any tale or poem of this WRITTER. He's the father of moder horror and I agree all his tales are great. When I saw this tale on the list I was so excited, even I knew it before.
THE TELL TALE HEART
ReplyDeleteThis rich story begins with the tale of its protagonist that talks about how his life with an old man and his evil eye. The young says he loves the old man because he is good with it, but the eye of man makes him feel sick. . It's almost devilish eye that is the reason of their folly. Our protagonist tired of feeling sick and overwhelmed ago an evil plan against the elderly. On night number 8 the young man decides to go to his bedroom and make the evil plan. The young man looks at him, suddenly moves in bed and the young raises doubts about the murder, but still with the plan. The old man is awakened by a noise. It's frightening, anywhere you hear a noise like BANG, BANG.BANG BANG; It beats the old heart to panic, it's like I could feel what's going to happen, our protagonist jumps into the room and thrown to the ground, put the bed on top of him, killing him slowly. The young body hidden under the floor and finally the murderer is at peace. Then three police knock on the door to ask for a shout. Young is not afraid and later leads to the old man's room just to show that everything is fine. Young takes 4 chairs in the room and start talking, but what follows does not expect insurance, suddenly a noise begins to sound very strong and tall, the young do not want to listen, but it does. The noise is produced by the old man's heart. . This is so scary that the young begin to speak up and sweats and trembles. Move the chair and walk around the place, but it sounds again BANG, BANG. BANG, BANG, and louder and louder. The murderer can’t keep doing this; everything is out of control and is betrayed and takes the heart to see the horrible beats it produces. This is a great story because one can’t imagine that something like this could happen and why the author captivates and holds the attention of the reader is very interesting and it is creative.
THE END
THE TELL TALE HEART
This great story began with the tale of his protagonist who talk about how his life was an old man and his evil eye. Young says he loved the old because he was good with it, but the eye of man made him feel sick. It was something almost devilish eye that was the reason for his madness. Our tired of feeling sick and overwhelmed protagonist made an evil plan against the elderly. On night number 8 the young man decided to go to his bedroom and perform the evil plan. The young man looked at him, suddenly moved in bed and the young raises doubts about the murder, but still with the plan. The old man awakened by a noise. It's frightening, anywhere a noise like BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG was heard; It beats the old heart to panic, it's like I could feel what was gonna happen, our protagonist jumped into the room and threw it to the ground, put the bed on top of him, killing him slowly. Young hid the body under the floor and finally the murderer was at peace. Then three police officers knocked on the door to ask for a shout. The young man was not afraid and later led to the old man's room just to show that everything was fine. Young took 4 chairs in the room and began to talk and laugh, but what follows insurance not expecting it, suddenly a noise started to sound very strong and tall, the girl who wanted to not be heard, but it does. The noise was produced by the old man's heart. This was so terrifying that the young man began to speak up and sweating and shaking. Move the chair and walk around the place, but it sounds again BANG, BANG, BANG, and louder and louder. The murderer can´t keep doing this; everything is out of control and ratted and pulled the heart so they could see the horrible beats that produced. This is a great story because one can´t imagine that something like this could happen and why the author captivates and holds the reader's attention is very interesting and it is also creative.
THE END
The tell-tale heart.
ReplyDeletethis is a short story about a young man who lives in a house with an old man.
the old man is often kind with him and the young man is a nice person but there is one problem, the old man has a weird eye, It is a strange clear blue eye, thi is the only problem with the old man and everytime the young man looks at the eye he loses control and wants to kill him !!!
He doesn't consider himself as a mad person, he just hate that eye and wants to kill the owner of the eye, the young man makes a plan, every night he goes to the old man's room with a lantern but the eye is closed, and when It is closed he doesn't feel the hate inside him and he can't kill the old man. he does this for seven nights. And on the eighth night he finally finds the strange eye opened, he feels sick and he has the opportunity, the young man can feel the old man's heart beating like a bang! He enters to the room and attacks the old man until his heart stop beating and then puts the body under the floor.
A few minutes later someone knocks at the door, three policemen come into the house and say that something is wrong, they begin to search all over the house but they don't find anything, the young man is not worried, the four sit around the room where the body is and suddenly the young man starts to hear a little bang, a few second later the sound is louder, he can hear the old man's beating heart under the floor and he thinks that the policemen hear it too, the bangs increase and he can't stand the guilt inside him, finally he shouts at the police: Okay ! I did it ! I did it ! His body is under the floor, can't you hear his heart beatting ?
this is a short story about a young man who lived in a house with an old man.
the old man was often kind with him and the young man was a nice person but there was one problem, the old man had a weird eye, It was a strange clear blue eye, thi was the only problem with the old man and everytime the young man looked at the eye he lost control and wanted to kill him !!!
He didn't consider himself as a mad person, he just hated that eye and wanted to kill the owner of the eye, the young man made a plan, every night he went to the old man's room with a lantern but the eye was closed, and when It was closed he didn't feel the hate inside him and he couldn't kill the old man. he did this for seven nights. And on the eighth night he finally found the strange eye opened, he felt sick and he had the opportunity, The young man could feel the old man's heart beating like a bang! He entered to the room and attacked the old man until his heart stopped beating and then put the body under the floor.
A few minutes later someone knocked at the door, three policemen came into the house and said that something was wrong, they began to search all over the house but they didn't find anything, the young man was not worried, the four sat around the room where the body was and suddenly the young man started to hear a little bang, a few second later the sound was louder, He could hear the old man's beating heart under the floor and he thought that the policemen heard it too, the bangs increased and he couldn't stand the guilt inside him, finally he shouted at the police: Okay ! I did it ! I did it ! His body is under the floor, can't you hear his heart beatting ?
I think it is a wonderful story, I have always liked Edgar Allan poe, I think he was totally mad and that helped him to write those kind of stories with unexpectable endings
DeleteTHE LETTER IN BROWN INK
ReplyDeleteThis story talks about a man who walks around his garden, when suddenly a letter falls in front of him, a letter written with brown ink. The letter is written by a girl, she says that she is locked in a room at the top of the white house, and she needs help but anyone cannot ask for her at the front door because a woman would kill her. The man is not a young man, and he says that his days of adventure are over and because indeed he has a bad leg. He reminds when he was eighteen and he says that he used to climb over the roofs to the high window in that house because he had a beautiful girlfriend and actually they love each other, her name is Valeria but her older sister is jealous about Valeria’s love, so she makes Valeria marries another man. Then the man also married someone else.
The Valeria’s older sister still lives in the house. Her name is Miss Rowsley and everyone thinks that she is mad.
This man has a son, his name is John, and he shows him the letter, John read the letter and he says to his father that they have to help that girl. They wait until the night to rescue her. John climbs across the white house, and when he arrives to the Top of the house he notices that there are some bars of metal at the window’s room where the girl is locked, he quickly bring a tool to cut through the metal, when he is cutting the bars a light appears and then he see a woman. It’s Miss Rowsley and she looks angry and she has a big knife in her hand. Jhon’s Dad decides to help him. They achieve to caught Miss Rowsley and the man realizes that the girls was too similar to Valeria, in fact that girl is Valeria´s daughter and her name is Sophia, and she says that her mom Valeria died two years ago, that´s why she decides to live with her aunt Miss Rowsley. In that moment Miss Rowsley reveals that she is in love with the man( William, she says his name) and she jumps across the window and she die.
Finally Sophia sell her aunt’s house and she moves to Italy to study.
But there is a secret; Valeria writes the letter with her own blood.
THE LETTER IN BROWN INK
ReplyDeleteThis story talked about a man who walked around his garden, when suddenly a letter fell in front of him, a letter written with brown ink. The letter was written by a girl, she said that she was locked in a room at the top of the white house, and she needed help but anyone could not ask for her at the front door because a woman would kill her. The man was not a young man, and he said that his days of adventure were over and because indeed he had a bad leg. He reminded when he was eighteen and he said that he used to climb over the roofs to the high window in that house because he had a beautiful girlfriend and actually they loved each other, her name was Valeria but her older sister was jealous about Valeria’s love, so she made Valeria marry another man. Then the man also married someone else.
The Valeria’s older sister still lived in the house. Her name was Miss Rowsley and everyone thought that she was mad.
This man had a son, his name was John, and he showed him the letter, John read the letter and he said to his father that they had to help that girl. They waited until the night to rescue her. John climbed across the white house, and when he arrived to the Top of the house he noticed that there were some bars of metal at the window’s room where the girl was locked, he quickly brought a tool to cut through the metal, when he was cutting the bars a light appeared and then he saw a woman. It was Miss Rowsley and she looked angry and she had a big knife in her hand. Jhon’s Dad decided to help him. They achieved to caught Miss Rowsley and the man realized that the girl was too similar to Valeria, in fact that girl was Valeria´s daughter and her name was Sophia, and she told them that her mom Valeria died two years ago, that´s why she decided to live with her aunt Miss Rowsley. In that moment Miss Rowsley j reveals that she was in love with the man( William, she said his name) and she jumped across the window and then she died.
Finally Sophia sold her aunt’s house and she moved to Italy to study.
But there was a secret; Valeria wrote the letter with her own blood.
I think the story was good, it was not what I expected because I wanted more horror or something that made me scream lol. This activity helped me to acquire new vocabulary and grammar structure.
MADAM CROWL’S GHOST
ReplyDeleteThis tale is about a thirteen year old girl that goes to work for Madam Crowl at Applewale Hpuse. She feels sadness as she leaves her home because she has never been away from her family and she knows she will miss them.When she gets there- Madam's Crowl's shouse- she starts to get nervious. The house is really big and on top of it, she does not know the lady she'll be working for, nor her own aunt!
Nevertheless, she iss welcome with open arms by her aunt and meets Mrs Wyvern who works in the house too. In the first days of her stay, she learns about Madam Crowl's weird behavior; how she has to be watched 24/7 because she tries to jump into the fire or out the window. She's also told not to get too close to the old lady.
One night the curiosity of the teenager gets the better of her and the lady ends up scaring her to death. "Why do you say I killed the boy" says Madam's Crowl while she attempts to get closer to the girl and put her hands arround her throat. Luckily, the girl's aunt comes to the rescue and after the teen gets out of the lady's room, she tells eveything to Mrs Wyvern who in return tells her a bit about Madam Crowl's story. About how she married Squire Crowl years ago, a man whose wife had died and left him with a son; a rebel kid that one day went missing to never be found.
Six months pass until Madam Crowl's falls ill and dies. The girl and her aunt wait at Applewale house for Squire Chevenix's arrival, Madam Crwol's grandson who is coming from France to paid them for their work.A few days later, while the girl sleeps-in a different room- she starts to see strange shadows on her bed, the wall and the ceiling. She thinks the house is in on fire but when she looks over her shoulder she finds Madam's Crowl at the door! the lady smirks and then the room goes dark and the girl runs out to her aunt's room. The next morning the Squire comes to the house and the girl and her out give him the key they found in one of Madam Crowl's boxes the night before. The middle-aged man leads them to the door that said key is supposed to open and they find a pile of bones.
Afterwards, the girl is given some money and sent home. Some years later her aunt comes to visit and tells her the rest of the story. Turns out the bones were the old Squire's son and they were hidden in that part of the house because Madame Crowl shut the kid to die there in the dark.
MADAM CROWL’S GHOST
ReplyDeleteThis tale is about a thirteen year old girl that went to work for Madam Crowl at Applewale Hpuse. She felt sadness as she left her home because she had never been away from her family and she knew she will miss them.When she got there- Madam's Crowl's shouse- she started to get nervious. The house was really big and on top of it, she did not know the lady she'll be working for, nor her own aunt!
Nevertheless, she was welcome with open arms by her aunt and met Mrs Wyvern who worked in the house too. In the first days of her stay, she learnt about Madam Crowl's weird behavior; how she had to be watched 24/7 because she tried to jump into the fire or out the window. She also was told not to get too close to the old lady.
One night the curiosity of the teenager got the better of her and the lady ended up scaring her to death. "Why do you say I killed the boy" said Madam's Crowl while she attempted to get closer to the girl and put her hands arround her throat. Luckily, the girl's aunt came to the rescue and after the teen got out of the lady's room, she told eveything to Mrs Wyvern who in return told her a bit about Madam Crowl's story. About how she married Squire Crowl years ago, a man whose wife had died and left him with a son; a rebel kid that one day went missing to never be found.
Six months passed until Madam Crowl's fell ill and died. The girl and her aunt waited at Applewale house for Squire Chevenix's arrival, Madam Crwol's grandson who was coming from France to paid them for their work. A few days later, while the girl sleept-in a different room- she started to see strange shadows on her bed, the wall and the ceiling. She thought the house was on fire but when she looks over her shoulder she finds Madam's Crowl at the door! the lady smirked and then the room went dark and the girl ran out to her aunt's room. The next morning the Squire came to the house and the girl and her out gave him the key they found in one of Madam Crowl's boxes the night before. The middle-aged man led them to the door that said key was supposed to open and they found a pile of bones.
Afterwards, the girl was given some money and sent home. Some years later her aunt came to visit and told her the rest of the story. Turns out the bones were the old Squire's son and they were hidden in that part of the house because Madame Crowl shut the kid to die there in the dark.
I find the story, interesting and clever but I didn't like it that much. Romantic and angst-filled stories are more my thing; Not to say this tale was bad, though!
THE ASH TREE
ReplyDeleteThis story occurred in a large house in a small village in the east of England and began fifty years ago.
In this area from England, the people believed in witches and another mysterious things, and because of it, there was a court to fix the mysteries out. And Sir Richard lived here, at Castringham Hall, in an old house. This house was really large, with a big garden and has some trees; one of them was near from the Mrs. Mothersole´s window, his neighbor, apparently normal, until one night, Sir Richard heard a noise, and he wanted to know what was it; he looked through the window, suddenly he was amazed when he saw Mrs. Mothersole climbing on the ash tree with a knife in his hand, yelling and saying… “I´m going to kill you”. Sir Richard went to the court to give an inform about it; and at the next day Mrs. Was taken to the nearest town to be hang by the neck, Sir Richard was there, she said something but he could not hear that.
Afterwards, his friend, Sir Crome came to live in his place, and Sir Richard took the house of in front. But that the first night Sir Richard heard a lot of noises in his window, but he slept thinking it was the branches. At the next day, the housekeeper found him dead and totally black.
Time after, grandson´s Sir Richard was living in this house but keep the mystery bedroom locked, but the next night he has to sleep there, because some guests were going to come to a little meeting, so the housekeeper said to him, you should think about sleep there, but he was not worried, then at the next day, everyone was in the garden, and some of the guests said, Sir Richard, I really do not want sleep in that bedroom, Sir Richard said, that’s my bedroom, and by the way, nothing is happening there, it is just… some noises because of the branches of that tree, and the guest said, but the branches do not reach the window, another guest said, maybe are rats, and that made Sir Richard feels better.
But, at the next day the housekeeper found Sir Richard dead and totally black, the guests wanted to know what really had happened, and went to the tree, the housekeeper climbed till the most high, and the tree has a hole surface, and there was a large place into the tree, but what really scared him was a big spider with a thousand more small spiders; the guests took staff to kill them and they did it. Later they was something in the hole base, it was a body, totally black, another man dead because of the spiders into the tree. They cut the tree and others more to be sure that it would not happen again.
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ReplyDeleteTHE MAN WITH THE NOSE
ReplyDeleteThis tale talks about Elizabeth and her couple that get married and they are planning their honeymoon. She says to him that they could go to the seaside, but her husband doesn’t want to go to the seaside ‘cause he hates the seafood and the sea air makes him feel sick and they decide not to go there, Elizabeth’s husband says that he wants to go to lake district, but his wife starts shaking but her husband doesn’t know why, and he ask for an explanation; Elizabeth says that she was on holiday with her parents in lake District and there was a hypnotist in the town, and they decide to go to the hypnotist’s show, they are in the show and the hypnotist wants to hypnotize someone and he choose Elizabeth and she thinks that it would be fun, and she did some silly things because of the hypnotist, she sings, dances, and runs around like a dog, when the come back to the hotel she feels very sick and falls in the bed for five weeks, and she doesn’t remember anything since that day, so Elizabeth and her husband decide not to go to lake district. Her husband says ‘why don’t we go abroad?’ and they decide to go to the river Rhine in Germany. They are now in Brussels and enjoy the narrow streets and suddenly they see some paintings in a shop, one painting shows a man climbing out of a grave, and the other one shows giants spiders above old buildings; they come back to the hotel; Elizabeth’s husbands is deeply sleep when suddenly he is awake and he wonders why? And it happened ‘cause his wife was screaming, she is standing by the bed with her face full of horror and she is crying wildly because she saw a terrible man in the room, and her husband says ‘what terrible man?’ she says that the man is not an ordinary man, he has a nose, a very large nose and very sharp and pointed and he ordered her to come with him, and he looks like the hypnotist. The next day, they are sailing down the Rhine looking at the view, they book a hotel in Wiesbaden and they travel by road to reach the hotel, the reach the hotel at midnight, two or three men are standing at the door, when Elizabeth gets out of the carriage she screams and points with her finger and says ‘there he is – there!’ and her husband sees a tall man, he is standing half in the shadow of the night and half in the light of the hotel and then Elizabeth’s husband sees his wife falls and he catches and carries her to the hotel. Two weeks passes and now they are in Lucerne sitting on a hillside above a lake when suddenly Elizabeth’s husband says that he has to go because his uncle is very close to death, but says that he must not go, because if he leaves that will be the end of all, but she doesn’t have a good reason so he decide leaves next day. when he returns to the town in search of his wife after the death of his uncle, he notices that she is not in the hotel and he asks a waiter of the hotel if he has seen his wife, but the waiter only knows that Elizabeth has leaved with a man, Elizabeth's husband asks to the waiter if he knows how is that man, but the waiter just remember that the man has a big, sharp, pointed nose and suddenly the cries because he knows that the man is the hypnotist and twenty years ago that Elizabeth's husband is still looking for his beloved wife and asks help from people to find her.
THE MAN WITH THE NOSE
DeleteThis tale talks about Elizabeth and her couple that got married and they planed their honeymoon. She said to him that they could go to the seaside, but her husband didn’t want to go to the seaside ‘cause he hates the seafood and the sea air makes him feel sick and they decided not to go there, Elizabeth’s husband said that he wants to go to lake district, but his wife started shaking but her husband didn’t know why, and he asked for an explanation; Elizabeth said that she was on holiday with her parents in lake District and there was a hypnotist in the town, and they went to the hypnotist’s show, they were in the show and the hypnotist wanted to hypnotize someone and he chose Elizabeth and she thought that it would be fun, and she did some silly things because of the hypnotist, she sang, danced, and ran around like a dog, when the came back to the hotel she felt very ill and felt in the bed for five weeks, and she doesn’t remember anything since that day, so Elizabeth and her husband didn’t go to lake district. Her husband said ‘why don’t we go abroad?’ and they traveled to the river Rhine in Germany. They were in Brussels and enjoyed the narrow streets and suddenly they saw some paintings in a shop, one painting showed a man climbing out of a grave, and the other one showed giants spiders above old buildings; they came back to the hotel; Elizabeth’s husbands was deeply sleep when suddenly he was awake and he wondered why? And it happened ‘cause his wife screamed, she was by the bed with her face full of horror and she cried wildly because she saw a terrible man in the room, and her husband said: ‘what terrible man?’ she said that the man was not an ordinary man, he had a nose, a very large nose and very sharp and pointed and he ordered her to come with him, and he looked like the hypnotist. The next day, they were down the Rhine looking at the view, they booked a hotel in Wiesbaden and they traveled by road to reach the hotel, the reached the hotel at midnight, two or three men were at the door, when Elizabeth got out of the carriage she screamed and pointed with her finger and said ‘there he is – there!’ and her husband saw a tall man, the man was standing half in the shadow of the night and half in the light of the hotel and then Elizabeth’s husband saw his wife falls and he caught and carries her to the hotel. They were in Lucerne two weeks after they were sat on a hillside above a lake when suddenly Elizabeth’s husband said that he has to go because his uncle is very close to death, but Elizabeth said that he must not go, because if he leaves that will be the end of all, but she doesn’t had a good reason, so he leaved next day. he returned to the town in search of his wife after the death of his uncle, he noticed that she was not in the hotel and he asked a waiter of the hotel if he saw his wife, but the waiter only knows that Elizabeth has leaved with a man, Elizabeth's husband asked to the waiter if he knows how is that man, but the waiter just remembered that the man had a big, sharp, pointed nose and suddenly the cried because he knew that the man is the hypnotist and twenty years ago that Elizabeth's husband is still looking for his beloved wife and asks help from people to find her.
I really liked this story because it was narrated in a different way from other stories, and every time I read this tale I can imagine the scenario in which the story happens.
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ReplyDeleteTHE TELL – TALE HEART
ReplyDeleteThe history began about a young man who lives in an old man’s house, But there was something he didn’t like, and that was the old man's eye; the young man had a great idea, this was spinning in his head, he wanted the old man, the old man was always friendly with the young, but the young man described as the old man’s eye like a terrible and ugly eye was the evil eye. The young man wanted to kill the old man, because he didn’t see the eye of the old man anymore.
the young entered to the room the old man every night, but he didn’t decide to kill him; until the eighth night, he did a noise and the old man was frightened, he knew that evil was there in his room, he was feeling very sick and his heart was beating louder the sound was striking. The young man was feeling sorry for the old man, but he was determined to kill him and he did. The young was buried them under the floor, the next day someone knocked on the door. The young man didn’t frightened by what he did, he opened the door and he invited the police to enter, the young prepared tea for them, they spoke quietly and looked all young happy ,he told a convincing story and they believed it.
The young was hearing a noise a little heartbeat, He knew very well that noise, he was terrified and he spoke loudly, but he didn’t keep the calmed the young screaming, “the evil eye” the young man was losing his head, he told all to the cops: “the old man's body was always under us”, the Young said “his horrible heart was beating”.
THE TELL – TALE HEART
The history speaks about a young man who lives in an old man’s house, but there is something that doesn’t like to this young man, that’s the old man’s eye. The young man has a great idea, and this turns around his head; he loves the old man, the old man is always kind with the young, but the old man’s eye always sick and scare him. The young man describe the old man’s eye how a terrible and ugly eye like evil eye.
The young wants to kill the old man, because he doesn’t want to see the old man’s eye anymore. The young man enters to the old man’s room every night, but he doesn’t decide to kill him, until the eighth night, he makes noise and the old man scares; he knows that the evil is there in the room, he feels really frightened and his heart beats louder and louder, the noise is a striking, the young feels sorry for the old man but is determined to kill him and he does.
The young man buries the old man’s body under the floor , and the next day someone knocks at the street door, the young man doesn’t scare about the murder he opens the door and he invites to pass into the three police, the young man prepares a tea for them, and he starts a great conversation, and all looks happy the young says a convincing story and they believed it, in a suddenly moment the young man hears a little noise a little heartbeat, he knows really good that noise, he feels terrified and speaks loudly, but he can’t to calm down at all, and he stars yelling you evil man. The young man loses his sane and he tells everything to them: “the old man’s body is under us, his horrible heart is beating”
I like this story, the author is obsessed with the madness in the humans, we can see the in all the stories, I really like the horror stories and the tell-tale heart is great, I really like.
THE BRAZILIAN CAT
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Marshall is a young man without money and profession. His father said him that he would receive all the money of his uncle. After a time, the Marshall´s father died. Now, Marshall is living in London with a lot of problems as consequence of his owes. He has a cousin called Everard King, who is a rich man. Everard has a large country house called Greylands. As the court is expecting him, he decides to accept Everard´s invitation. He hopes that his cousin pays some of his bills.
He arrives to Greylands; he is surprised, because the garden is full of strange animals. The garden is a zoo. His cousin receives him kindly. His wife is Brazilian. She wants that Marshall return to London. She is unfriendly and rude. Everard shows to Marshall the zoo, but too something very special for him, The Brazilian Cat. The cat is in a small building. The room has a metal´s cage where the cat remains in the night, during the day it is running around the room.
Marshall remains there for six days. During that time, he and his cousin talk about the Marshall´s troubles, but Everard said him that he would help him. That night, the wind is blowing strongly for the storm; they decide to go the Cat´s room. The cat is anxious and it begins to make deep angry noises. It is hungry. Everard go out in search of food and the door is closed. Although Marshall begins to ask help, Everard do not answer. Then Marshall is thinking who he could stay alive until the morning.
The windows have bars across it. There has not light. The metal cage is open; the cat might go out at any time. He looks the cage and he decided to climb and to stay at the top. When the light begins to come through the windows, the cat could see to Marshall. It is angry and hungry. The cat goes out of the cage. While it is running around the room, Marshall begins to move the cage door. All of a sudden, the cat jumps and Marshall throw his jacket to the animal. He gets into the cage, but the cat bit a piece out of the Marshall´s leg. After a time, the cat falls asleep. Marshall sleeps too. In the morning, Everard go to see the Cat´s room, Marshall did not move. Everard is happy, but, when he arrives into the room, the cat jumps on him. It is very anxious and hungry for the blood.
After a few days, Everard´s wife is going to visit to Marshall because he is ill. She talks with Marshall about the terrible life with Everard and his plans. Then, Marshall returns to London. The lawyer Mr. Summer talks him about the death of his uncle´s money. He died the twenty- third of August, the same day that Marshall was in the cat´s cage. He knows that his uncle´s money is “Everard King”.
THE BRAZILIAN CAT
ReplyDeletePAST
Marshall was a young man without money and profession. His father said him that he would receive all the money of his uncle. After a time, the Marshall´s father died. Then Marshall lived In London with a lot of problems as consequence of his owes. He had a cousin called Everard King, who was a rich man. Everard had a large country house called Greylands. As the court was expecting him, he decided to accept Everard´s invitation. He was hoped that his cousin would pay some of his bills.
When he arrived to Greylands, he was surprised, because the garden was full of strange animals. The garden was a zoo. His cousin received him kindly. His wife was Brazilian. She wanted that Marshall would return to London. She was unfriendly and rude. Everard showed to Marshall the zoo, but too something very special for him, The Brazilian Cat. The cat was in a small building. The room had a metal´s cage where the cat was remaining in the night, during the day it was running around the room. It didn´t taste the human body, only it eat meat that Everard was giving it.
Marshall stayed there for six days. During that time, he and his cousin told about the Marshall´s troubles, but Everard said him that he would help him. That night, while the wind was blowing strongly for the storm, they decided to go the Cat´s room. The cat was anxious and it began to make deep angry noises. It was hungry. Everard went out in search of food and the door closed. Although Marshall asked help, Everard did not answer. Then Marshall thought how he could stay alive until the morning.
The windows had bars across it. There had not light. The metal cage was open; the cat might go out at any time. He looked the cage and he decided to climb and to stay at the top. When the light began to come through the windows, the cat could see to Marshall. It was angry and hungry. The cat went out of the cage. While it was running around the room, Marshall began to move the cage door. All of a sudden, the cat jumped and Marshall threw his jacket to the animal. He got into the cage, but the cat bit a piece out of the Marshall´s leg. After a time, the cat slept. Marshall slept too. In the morning, Everard went to see the Cat´s room, Marshall did not move. Everard was happy, but, when he arrived into the room, the cat jumped on him. It was very anxious and hungry for the blood.
After a few days, Everard´s wife went to visit to Marshall because he was ill. She told him about the terrible life with Everard and his plans. Marshall returned to London. The lawyer Mr. Summer told him about the death of his uncle´s money. He had died the twenty- third of August, the same day that Marshall was in the cat´s cage. He knew that his uncle´s money was “Everard King”.
I liked a lot this story because I think that this kind of stories are very exciting. The tale catches the whole attention, from the same moment of to start to read. Too, I could learn vocabulary and expressions.
ReplyDeleteTHE LETTER IN BRON INK
ReplyDeleteWilliam walks in his garden and finds a letter that just fall, something unusual this is writes in brown ink. He reads and this is writes that a woman, she is asking for help because she is locked in a room of a white house, but it has to help climbing out the window of the room on the roof.
But William is not so young, he remembers a beautiful young woman he was in love with her, her name is Valeria, and she has a jealous older sister. Over time Valeria and William marry other people. The older sister Valeria lives in the house and she is called Miss Rowsley and neighbors think she's mad.
William shows the letter to his son named John, father and son agree, and John goes to the room roof and sees that the window is closed with bars and he returns home to take with to cut the bars, when he is cutting the second bar a voice sounds in the house and William, the father of John, although he has a bad leg goes to the window and sees a slovenly girl and Miss Rowsley in the room.
Rowsley is angry, with black lips and in her hands has a long knife. She threat to kill them to let thar William and her sister are together.
John and his father coming through the window and take the woman by the arms, the woman who was locked in the room says that she's her aunt, her parents are dead two years ago and Rowsley locked her two weeks ago, after asking to live together.
Miss Rowsley confesses to William that she has always been in love his, Willliam is very surprised and he lets her escape through the roof, this fall and she dies.
The woman who is in the room is called Sophia and is 17 years old and is Valeria´s daughter. Sophia sells the home of her aunt and she studies in Italy where she marries with an Italian artist.
Sophia's help letter is kept by William, which is written with a piece of window’s wood, the strange ink is her blood.
William walked in his garden and found a letter that just fall, something unusual this was write in brown ink. He read and this was write that a woman, she was asking for help because she was locked in a room of a white house, but it had to help climbing out the window of the room on the roof.
But William wasn’t so young, he remembered a beautiful young woman he was in love with her, her name was Valeria, and she had a jealous older sister. Over time Valeria and William marryed other people. The older sister Valeria lived in the house and she was called Miss Rowsley and neighbors thought she was mad.
William showed the letter to his son named John, father and son agreed, and John went to the room roof and saw that the window was closed with bars and he returned home to take with to cut the bars, when he was cutting the second bar a voice sounded in the house and William, the father of John, although he had a bad leg went to the window and saw a slovenly girl and Miss Rowsley in the room.
Rowsley was so angry, with black lips and in her hands had a long knife. She threated to kill them to let thar William and her sister were together.
John and his father were coming through the window and taked the woman by the arms, the woman who was locked in the room said that she was her aunt, her parents were dead two years ago and Rowsley locked her two weeks ago, after asked to live together.
Miss Rowsley confessed to William that she had always been in love his, Willliam was very surprised and he let her escape through the roof, this fell and she died.
The woman who was in the room was called Sophia and was 17 years old and was Valeria´s daughter. Sophia sold the home of her aunt and she studied in Italy where she married with an Italian artist.
Sophia's help letter was kept by William, which was written with a piece of window’s wood, the strange ink was her blood.
DeleteThe detective and horror stories are a very striking and interesting genre in my opinion, ensures that readers analyze the information presented and he gives conclusions. This case of THE LETTER IN BROWN INK, is interesting because it shows several aspects of human relationships and the possible endpoints that can be reached, involves several characters and a storyline that has been developing for several years.